Only if it’s central to your story and you’re comfortable. You’re not required to share hardship.
College Essay Mistakes to Avoid
Written by Ascend Academic mentors—students from top universities helping others succeed.
A few missteps can weaken an otherwise strong essay. Here are the most common and how to fix them.
Generic Openings and Topics
Avoid “ever since I was young” and broad themes that could fit anyone. Be specific to your experience and perspective.
Listing Without Reflecting
Don’t just list achievements; the rest of the app does that. Reflect on meaning, growth, or fit.
Tone and Authenticity
Sound like yourself. Avoid thesaurus overload and fake humility. See personal statement tips and supplemental essay guide. For feedback, college admissions counseling.
FAQ
No. Essays must be your work. Counselors and teachers can give feedback.
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